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Early Winter Alex by Allantiee Early Winter Alex by Allantiee
It'll be cover of Gamma Draconis 1st chapter <3
As long as it's almost whole about alex I think it's appropriate :D
This time in winter aura <3
with his big headphones (I love that pattern! I wanna have such headphones! D: )
Oh must say I'm in love with that picture <3 ^_^

Tools: promarkers & copicmarkers , pencils
Time: 1 day <3
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I really like the color scheme in this one. It's very harmonious and pleasant to the eyes. :)

My eye first goes to the hair, and then through it, which is amazing. It really feels like hair by looking at it, but also like an ocean I'm flowing through. Very nice.

I also must compliment you on the fur. I find much difficulty in being simple and making fur look like fur, but you've accomplished it very well.

I also want headphones like that, they're so expressive.

As for the critical part of this critique, I'm unsure on what the blue parts on the lower right hand corner are. I assume they're fingers, but the pattern throws me off.

Also, about the nose, it feels like the shiny bit by the nostril doesn't belong there and is too attractive to the eye, and by that I mean, my eye keeps going there when it shouldn't.

All in all, great piece and I hope you'll continue creating art! :heart:
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AquaLittleBoy Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Świetna praca! ^-^
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WhIppIng-b0y Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Nice colours there.
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^
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WhIppIng-b0y Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
welcome so much XD
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ColorMeInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student General Artist
This flows so well! great job!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ;) I really appreciate
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ColorMeInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem ^_^!
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh i love the texture in this!!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh thank you so so much ^^
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
anytime! I can critique your images if you need them! (:
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that'll be very nice of you ^^!
That's what I need ^^!
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I shall, are there any specific drawings you would like me to critique
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well ... I need overall critique, you can feel free to choose what you like to critique :)
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Elveanna Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi there! :wave: I'm here on behalf of #Traditional-Artists so you get to see all the feedback this piece got at our last Critique Night! :aww:

I hope it is helpful and you can use it for your future work!

:bulletblue: By =pafmaster:
“I actually really like most of the features on the face, but the eye and eyebrow are actually out of place. The eye is also looking closer to a 3/4 view further making it look out of place. I also would advise not doing such hard lines around certain areas, such as the headphones. It makes them stand out more and be cartoony comparatively while the rest has beautiful thin lines such as around the face. The hand also looks out of place and at first is hard to define. Either show more of it so it's easier to see as "hand" or finish pushing it out of the picture. You want people to be able to understand everything that's going on at a glance, but still capture their attention. You've done the the later, but a few small things I mentioned break away from full understanding.”

:bulletblue: By *leilalilium:
“Beautiful work! Excellent technique, original, I also like very much the visual impact. I love the hair, and the lines of all drawing. The theme of music is good associated with color and background, I think it's perfect. I don't know why but it seems to me that could not be done otherwise. the only thing is that the fingers should be definitely improved.”

:bulletblue: By ~FrancoBrotto:
“Ok, first of all, I've got to admit that I really don't like this kind of style, but, by a first look it's heeeeell good performed! The atmosphere is really good, it seems that we are really at early winter! The headphones with the treble clef and the notes by the hand it really adds some quiet and calm feeling! The colors of the night are all well used. Congrats!”

:bulltblue: By ~Elveanna:
“I think it's a beautiful piece. The calm colours fit the motive very well, as well as the facial expression and the bit of wind. Anatomically there are two things if you ask me: Firstly, seeing the eye in the profile you ought to turn it even more than it is, even though it's well done and beautiful like this. Secondly it would be nice to see more of the forehead/ have the face a bit farther down. But the shading on it is beautiful, love the nose :) And you got the flow in the hair and the fur very well. The fur looks really fluffy as well, good job there! The glove is a bit odd again, somewhat shapeless, maybe you could work on that. The notes on it are fabulous, though, and the design of the headphones is so great! I want them too ::D

:bulletblue: By *pbird12:
“Markers are not a medium I work in, so for the colouring part, I'll just say this looks excellent to me. The palette you have used works really well. There is a cold icy feel to the picture which is nice. The flowing hair is nice and detailed and I think maybe the fur collar might have benefitted from a little of this treatment. The face almost has a catlike quality to it, which is great if this is what you were going for, but if not the eye area does need a little thinking through. Overall this has great impact and an excellent finish, I like it :)

:icontraditional-artists: :heart:
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for criticizing me :D!
<3
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srkfan Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
gosh, I couldn't believe this wasn't digitally done :O
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha xD
So it means that it's good ;)
thank you a lot for commenting :)!
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yulii Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
love the details on the eyes, hair and the whole face. and love the sexy hair work. beautiful image!!!!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha :D thank you a lot ^^!
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XxMondayMorningxX Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's great! Brilliant shading! And I love the combination of white and blue in the hair!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much :hug:
I'm fan of his hair xD I'd like to have like that ones xD
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SuperSmurgger Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So freakin' colorful and well-detailed ; masterpiece !!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww thank you :)! :hug:
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SuperSmurgger Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very Welcome ! :huggle:
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Alice-in Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! It's so gorgeous! I love the colors and design!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha thank you ;)
I like him a lot xD
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Alice-in Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome, he is very cute :3
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Nox-dl Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ładnie wyszło. Dobrze wyglądają włosy i futro. Wzorek na rękawiczkach też fajny.
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A wiem xD
dziękuję xD
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
o matko..O.O
:wow:

padłam...........
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ojć czemu xD?
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
bo to jest prześliczne ^^ padłam z zachwytu
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oooj przestań ;) wcale nie jest takie super ;p
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
daj mi sie pozachwycać ^^ i naprawdę nie przesadzam ^^
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
prosze xD nie ma problemu :P
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
^^ :hug:
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LittleMissAlexius Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, the skin is just amazing and I love his hair! cool headphones :D
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^!
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LittleMissAlexius Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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ImperialPoison Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Those headphones are awesome, and I like the way you did his hair!
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha thank you a lot ;)
hair is thing that I like to draw the most <3 ^^
I envy him those headphones T^T I'd like to have similar!
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Conreeaght Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011
Woah! Super <3
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Allantiee Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
taaa :3
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Conreeaght Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011
:P
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