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previous page (beginning) 
next pageHere is a 2nd page of mine and
comic 
I spended about 2 days to finish it D: I'm completely exhausted and angry because my promarkers which I had to use , died in unexpected moment T^T
It's my first time with serious comic and I really dunno how to do it ^^ I use my intuition xD
But I finished ! xD
(I have to admit that I love it so much!)
I hope you will like it as much as I do!
Other to that series :
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oh WOW a DD
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Overall Vision Originality Technique Impactok, here's a small tidbit of what i think. not great with visual art so i'll give it my best shot.
one thing that bothers me here is the words don't come off in the expressions. the top picture is the most believable. he (she?) looks about to dose off from lack of air. the middle one looks like he's holding his breath and not yet in need of assistance. the bottom one looks like he's trying to read my mind, he has an intense look, quite different from one who is suffocating. the one on the left looks somewhat right. the body signs are a bit off thogh. he looks like he's trying to choke himself to death.
other than that it is well drawn, love the water swirls, even the ones inside the bubbles.
that's just what i think.